Thursday, January 14, 2016
I was not sure what I want to free write about, so I'm just going to talk about something impressive about me. Something that is very important to me is PlayStation. I am pretty talented in PlayStation, especially Madden. I know this, because my friends and I play multiplayer seasons all the time and we have completed three seasons, of which I have won the Super Bowl in all three. Now I am not one to brag, but three Super Bowls is an impressive feat, it is almost unheard of for a team to win back to back Super Bowls, but my team won three, it's unbelievable. We are in the midst of our fourth season right now and I'd be lying if I said I didn't want this fourth Super Bowl. If I somehow pull out this fourth championship, it would really solidify me as an all time great. Along with this, it would be great publicity for Defiance College to have a 4-time Super Bowl champ attend school here. I am going to win this one not just for my own greatness, but I am going to win it for all of Yellow Jacket nation.
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I love the choice to write about something as impressive as that! You also wrote this very well. The only thing I see is that you probably should have stopped your sentence after "impressive feat" and made, "It's unbelievable" as it's own sentence. Great job though! :)
ReplyDeleteI think it was a good idea to write about something that interests you. I liked your choice of words throughout and how you gave a shout out to Jacket Nation, however I must say, you're lucky I am not in that league.
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